Everyone I have just launched a new website for Holt Homes and would like any input to improve. Tell your friends I need work. Bre is expensive www.holthomesutah.com
Kevin, Your website is great! There is a spelling error in the last sentence of your Mission Statement. There is a s on the end of a word that shouldn't be there, but now I forgot the word. You will find it. I love you, Mom
Okay, there are a few things I'd change. On the About Us page, "We treat every project as if it was our own home," should technically be "We treat every project as if it were our own home."
And under Services, Decks Gazebos ect., you need a question mark at the end of that first sentence.
And your last sentence (on the same page): "No project is too small from Honey Do lists to emergencies, we have the expertise to get the job done" is a run on. It should be: "No project is too small. From Honey Do lists to emergencies, we have the expertise to get the job done.
Kevin,
ReplyDeleteYour website is great! There is a spelling error in the last sentence of your Mission Statement. There is a s on the end of a word that shouldn't be there, but now I forgot the word. You will find it. I love you,
Mom
Hey Kev. It's looking good! I thought it was really user friendly. Do you have any pictures of the decks or sheds or gazebo's that you have built?
ReplyDeleteIt looks great to me!
ReplyDeleteOkay, there are a few things I'd change. On the About Us page, "We treat every project as if it was our own home," should technically be "We treat every project as if it were our own home."
ReplyDeleteAnd under Services, Decks Gazebos ect., you need a question mark at the end of that first sentence.
ReplyDeleteAnd your last sentence (on the same page): "No project is too small from Honey Do lists to emergencies, we have the expertise to get the job done" is a run on. It should be: "No project is too small. From Honey Do lists to emergencies, we have the expertise to get the job done.